Tuesday, 16 December 2008

pang

with words in English and Danish

and with a clasp of the dark . skyet . overskyet
the door at the back . sparrow dives . fugl . fødsel
swoopers in bounds hjerte . heart sted af
of hus . un house ed . but will stays across it it
in side of us . like the øje of the ulv . in the past

soft take . to place this . en pine or kval or
before a last long dance . moving from flyde til gulv
she hits the pane . and the words start . windows
men på os . på denne place eller sted . på
there is a loss . en pinen . a pang that cuts layers

through the history of denne place . this hjem sted
vv

1 comments:

Tom Watts said...

HI Michael,

I don't know if you remember me. My name is Tom Watts, I met you in the bar after Roehampton Writes. Would it be possible to give me a description of the techniques used to achieve the poem you read that night.

Here's my email: wattsthetime@googlemail.com